Wednesday, February 23, 2011

Is Pattycake Retired?

THE "SUPER" - USE SUPER-ABUSE OF PASSIVE


The prefix "super" is on the 3290 times you repeat the "pounding" "super" in Seville and the 2830 translation in the translation to Latin America. Many of these prefixes-anglicisms could have been avoided. See blog post .




In English, the passive exists in the grammar books, and little else, but our language has a clear preference for the active construction. Already in the Song of My Cid the passive with "being" is used less than in Latin, and that relatively little use has continued to decrease (Outline of a new grammar of the English Language) until today, in the practical use of language - at levels-is pragmatic and sociolinguistic very, very rare and less. This does not occur in English, the language in which the passive has a great effect, apart from its presence in the grammar books, although it is true that there is some movement at the university for the active -.

Between prayers, correspondents have sent new information "and" new information has been transmitted by correspóndales "the English chooses the former, active.
English
The trend is to use active and passive call reflects: use of "is" more a verb active. For example, instead of saying "Peace was signed by the ambassadors," he would say "peace was signed by the ambassadors." He also "made peace ambassadors." If we do not show interest in the agent would say "It signed a peace treaty. "

Similarly, instead of saying, "This news has been reported (by agencies)," he would say "You have reported this news." If we want to present the subject: "Agencies reported the news. "

The Urantia Book contains hundreds of passive sentences, unfortunately, have been translated into English for hundreds of passive sentences, instead of using the active where possible or passive mirrors. The English result is a "strange", "unnatural", unusual to the ears of a native speaker. Although it is possible that some reader-or translator-creates the passive language is itself revealed. I tell a joke, no offense.

But as we shall also have formed passive sentences in English when they did not exist in the English original.

This occurs in both translations (Americas and Europe Sevillana). See examples of translation Seville:

Of the seven classes composing this group, only the Solitary Messengers Perhaps the Personal Aids and range the universe of universes. Solitary Paradise essengers Are Encountered from outward: through the circuits to the superuniverse Havona capitals and thence out Through the Sectors and local universes, With their subdivisions, and events to the Inhabited worlds. Although Solitary Messengers belong to the Higher Personalities of the Infinite Spirit, Their origin, nature, and DISCUSS SERVICE HAVE BEEN IN THE PAPER Preceding.


Sevillana or European

(264.11) 24:0.11 Of the seven classes that make up this group only the Solitary Messengers and Personal Assistants may travel the universe of universes. From Paradise to the outside, the Solitary Messengers are found from Havona circuits to the capitals of the super, and from there, in all sectors and the local universe, with its subdivisions, and even in the inhabited worlds. Although the Solitary Messengers belong to the Higher Personalities of the Infinite Spirit, ITS ORIGIN, NATURE AND THE SERVICE HAVE BEEN DISCUSSED IN THE PREVIOUS DOCUMENT.

could have said "have been discussed in the previous document"

It is the same in all these cases, one of hundreds:

(265.2) 24:1.2 The Universal Circuit Supervisors WERE MADE ONLY BY THE INFINITE SPIRIT and act only as agents Actor

(265.9) 24:1.9 In the worlds of each superuniverse headquarters are stationed secondary supervisors in charge of the local universes of time and space. The major and minor sectors are administrative divisions of the supergovernments, but do not address the issue of monitoring the spiritual energy. I do not know how many supervisors side of the circuits are in the great universe, but 84,691 Uversa are beings of this type. SECONDARY SUPERVISORS ARE CONSTANTLY MADE, from time to time displayed in groups of seventy in the worlds of the Supreme Executives.

265.10) 24:1.10 A tertiary supervisor circuits perform its function in the world headquarters of each local universe. This order, as well as secondary supervisors, IS CREATED CONTINUOUSLY, so in groups of seven. The Ancients of Days for its members to the local universes.


is created ...
(266.1) 24:1.11 supervisors circuits are created for specific tasks and serve eternally in groups where they were originally intended. Not rotate their service and, therefore, made a secular study of the problems encountered in realms where they were originally intended .

are created ...
(266.8) 24:2.2 The Census Directors are a special creation and completion of the Infinite Spirit, and do not know how many of them there. SO ARE CREATED able to maintain a perfect synchronism with the technique of the super-reflectivity, while at the same time is personally sensitive and responsive to the intelligent will.

But the translator uses the passive even when not in the English original, why?:

We Have No Knowledge as authentic to the time OR MANNER OF THE CREATION OF THE PERSONAL AIDS. Their number Must Be legion, But It Is Not of record on Uversa.


(268.1) 24:3.1 We have no real knowledge of when or how personal attendants were created. Their number must be huge, but not on Uversa files.

A as abusive use of the passive in English when its use is limited to little more than grammar books is nonsense.

Sunday, February 20, 2011

Battery Powered Motor Homemade

LA "First Source and Center" How strange, quirky TRANSLATION OF "FIRST SOURCE AND CENTER!

What amazing linguistic reflection has been the translator to translate from Seville or European FIRST / SECOND / THIRD SOURCE AND CENTER, as shown in the following quote, use the "unnatural" and strange construction made SOURCE-CENTER FIRST / SECOND? Why not simply have resulted First / Second / Third Source and Center as did the early translators?

III. THE FIRST SOURCE AND CENTER
Total, infinite reality is existential in seven Phases and seven co-ordinate as Absolutes:

1. The First Source and Center.
2. The Second Source and Center.
3. The Third Source and Center.
4. The Isle of Paradise.
5. The Deity Absolute.
6. The Universal Absolute.
7. The Unqualified Absolute. Let

translation:

III. THE FIRST POWER-CENTER
(4.13) 0:3.1 The total and infinite reality is existential in seven phases and in the form of seven coordinated Absolutes:
(5.1) 0:3.2 1. THE FIRST POWER-CENTER.
(5.2) 0:3.3 2. SOURCE TWO-CENTER.
(5.3) 0:3.4 3. SOURCE THREE-CENTER.
(5.4) 0:3.5 4. Paradise Island.
(5.5) 0:3.6 5. The Absolute Deity.
(5.6) 0:3.7 6. The Universal Absolute.
(5.7) 0:3.8 7. The Unqualified Absolute. [Another translation inaccurate.]

[An entry in this blog relating to the erroneous translation of "coordinates" for "coordinated."]

Strangely, in the following paragraph, use Source an inconsistent manner and First Center, omitting the already if unusual script, but then again used the expression above with the script.

(5.8) 0:3.9 God as ONE SOURCE AND CENTER is paramount - without conditions - in relation to the actual total. The First Source and Center is infinite and eternal, and therefore only limited or conditioned by his volition.

Consistency should also have used the apostrophe in other constructions:

(215.9) 19:1.12 So because of these and other reasons, the technique we use to approach man and his global issues is to embark on the journey through time and space, starting from the infinite eternal and divine SOURCE AND Paradise center of all reality, personality and all cosmic existence.

really do not know what has been said to philological speculation that expression so rare and I confess that I find hard to analyze. I will split:

The script

When we read this phrase with a hyphen (First Source and Center) joining two nouns, the first thing that comes to mind as a reader is that is the translator has tried to show a semantic link in the formation of lexical items. It is assumed that this is a unit with a high degree of cohesion, firmness and stability formal. It's like saying "director-host", "read-write" or "man-horse." Let's look at different cases: The semantic link never appears in the book of Urantia applied to the nouns "source" and "center", then in other cases:

  • Neither is God Merely a concept, the POWER- POTENTIAL of righteousness. (P. 23)
  • In its true essence, religion is a Faith-Trust in the goodness of God. (P. 40)
  • The concept of God as a King-JUDGE (p. 41)
  • liberated the PERSONALITY and the FATHER-SON-PERSONALITY absolute. (110) is
  • The nearest approach to a POWER-PERSONALITY focalization (p. 113)

's script source-center appears twice in the book with a script, but applied to Paradise and Major spirits:

  • Paradise is the headquarters of all personality universal Activities and the SOURCE-CENTER-SPACE FORCE of all energy and Manifestations (127)
  • while the Master Spirits SOURCE-CENTERS continue as far-flung for the ministry of the cosmic mind. (P. 116)
However, it is said, the First Source Center. If the book's authors had wanted to express the semantic relationship they had done.

There are cases where the dash indicates simply a relationship between the nouns, "Martinez-Ibarra link", "Spain-Portugal friendly," but that relationship appears in the English original as applied to others, never source-center:
  • -Relationship of the CREATURE CREATOR association
  • the TIME-SPACE creature (26)
  • family morality of the Parent-Child Relationship
Given this, why that unnecessary script?

Concordance

adjective 1. The First Source and Center.

This unusual lexicalization of the two substantive results in something even more strange that the word appears in the feminine, in keeping with the more distant noun. Normal-and natural-is that if the adjective refers to two nouns and are of different gender, the male predominance, in any event would conclude with the nearest, also masculine:

• Power-center FIRST

But of course, the prefix "La" is more "logical" to put the adjective in the masculine.

But the truth, as I said earlier, is to analyze this bizarre construction can get you in the philological madness, at least to me.

Also, if you have taken this as a lexical unit complex, why do they use too?:

(5.8) 0:3.9 God as FIRST SOURCE AND CENTER

In this case should have said clearly "ONE Source and Center" ["first line with the most nearby.]

Why not use ONE SOURCE AND CENTER, simply? Had been done in accordance with the teachings of the book, moreover, there is no problem with the agreement of the adjective, when will usually be in the singular prefix and concluding with the closest.











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Saturday, February 19, 2011

Brazilian Transvestites Pic

AVOID colloquial "FOOLISH", "Flirt", "Coax", "useless"

must be careful in our choice of words because it can not be right, especially in the translation to Latin America:


(39.1) 2:5.2 is wrong think God is Coax (INTO COAX) to love their children for the sacrifices of their sons or the intercession of her subordinate creatures, "because the Father himself loves you." In response to this paternal affection the wonderful God sends Adjusters for inhabiting the minds of men. God's love is universal, "Whosoever will may come." He wanted "to all men be saved to reach the possession of knowledge of the truth. " "I do not want anyone to perish." Best

with the verb "convince" or a synonym.

(916.7) 82:3.11 Some tribes married to his young men with widows and older women and then, when subsequently widowed, were allowed to marry virgins, thus ensuring, as expressed, not to be silly (FOOLS ) both parents, because they believed that would happen if two young mated. Other tribes limited mating peer groups. Was the limitation of marriage to certain peer groups that gave rise to primarily concepts incest. (In India even today there are no age restrictions for marriage.)

better: "foolish" or "lack of understanding"

(917.5) 82:4.2 The early marriage was an investment, financial speculation, was more a business issue than a matter of flirtations (flirtation). The former is married to the advantage and welfare of the group, so their marriages were planned and established by the group, parents and the elderly. Own customs and were effective in stabilizing the institution of marriage, this is proved by the fact that marriage was permanent among primitive tribes than it is among people modern. Best

"flirting."

267.7) 24:2.9 These beings have always been and always will be, directors of the Census. Would be comparatively useless (Useless) any other universal division of labor. But they are infallible in their function, never fail, never fake. And despite their wonderful powers and incredible powers, they are people, they have a presence and spirit form recognizable. Best

"ineffective" or any synonym.

Wine Causes Heart Palpitations

neologism: "DEITIZE" is not "Delphic" NI "DEITIZATION" ES "deification"

A reader and very knowledgeable of the Book, Jeannie Vazquez, I have pointed out, rightly, translation inaccurate word "deitize" (verb derived from "Deity", "Deity" in English) are both translations. In them the word chosen is "deification," but, as she says, the developers did not use the verb "to deify", used twice and with a completely different meaning, but "deitize" which also appears twice. Consider the two "deitize"


The Infinite Spirit eternalize concurrently with the birth of the Havona worlds, this central universe Being created by him and with him and in him in obedience to the Combined concepts and united wills of the Father and the Son. The Third Person DEITIZES by this very act of conjoint creation, and he thus forever becomes the Conjoint Creator.

Although these associations cannot augment the infinity of the Father-I AM, they do appear to make possible the subinfinite and subabsolute manifestations of his reality. The seven triunities multiply versatility, eternalize new depths, DEITIZE new values, disclose new potentialities, reveal new meanings; and all these diversified manifestations in time and space and in the eternal cosmos are existent in the hypothetical stasis of the original infinity of the I AM.

En el primer caso, el verbo es intransitivo, que en español traducimos como reflexivo-prononimal en este caso, y el segundo transitivo. El sufijo -Ize in English, like English, among other things, can mean "become" (done), for example crystallize (crystallize) or cause to Be or resemblance or conform to (cause something is, or appears to conform to something ), for example, "systematize" (systematic) or "Americanized" (Americanization).

On the other hand, there are several four cases of the noun "deitization"

The functions of the Paradise Trinity Are Not Simply the sum of the Father's Apparent endowment of divinity plus Those Specialized attributes That Are unique in the personal Existence of the Son and the Spirit. The association of the three Trinity Paradise Deities results in the evolution, eventuation, and DEITIZATION of new meanings, values, powers, and capacities for universal revelation, action, and administration. Living associations, human families, social groups, or the Paradise Trinity are not augmented by mere arithmetical summation. The group potential is always far in excess of the simple sum of the attributes of the component individuals.


We stand in awe of the possibility of what the future ages, wherein the Supreme and the Ultimate may attain new levels of divinity and ascend to new domains of personality function, may witness in the realms of the DEITIZATION of still other unexpected and undreamed of beings who will possess unimagined powers of enhanced universe co-ordination. There would seem to be no limit to the Deity Absolute’s potential of response to such unification of relationships between experiential Deity and the existential Paradise Trinity.


Prior to the DEITIZATION of the finite, it would appear that all reality diversification took place on absolute levels; but the volitional act promulgating finitereality connotes a qualification of absoluteness and implies the appearance of relativities.


The first level consists of three Trinities; the second level exists as the personality association of experiential-evolved, experiential-eventuated, and experiential-existential Deity Personalities. Regardless of conceptual and Stock And Difficulty in Understanding the Trinity of Triniti complete, the staff association of These three Deities on the second level has to manifest Become Our own universe age in the Phenomenon of the DEITIZATION of Majeston, Who Was I upgrade on this second level by the Absolute Deity, acting Through the Ultimate and in response to the initial creative Mandate of the Supreme Being.

Consider the translation of these terms in both translations:

version for the Americas:

have resulted in this deitize / deitization so inconsistent as to deify / deitization / deitization. If you have used the neologism "deidizar" in the translation of "deitización" should have done well to translate "deitize." There is also an inconsistency in the use of the neologism because on one hand say "deitization" and on the other, "deitization."

(91.4) 8:1.7 The Infinite Spirit eternalizes concurrently with the birth of the worlds Havona, this central universe is created by him and him and him in obedience to the combined concepts and the united wills of the Father and the Son. The Third Person is deified by the joint act of creation, making it forever in the Conjoint Creator.


(1150.14) 104:4.47 Although these associations may increase the infinity of the Father-I AM, it appears that enable and subabsolute subinfinite manifestations of its reality. The seven triunities multiply the diversity of talents, protracted new depths, deified new values, reveal new potentials, reveal new meanings. All these manifestations diversified in time and space, and the eternal cosmos, have their existence in stasis original hypothetical infinity of the I AM.


(113.3) 10:5.2 The functions of the Trinity of Paradise are not simply the sum of the apparent endowment of divinity of the Father more those specialized attributes that are unique in the personal existence of the Son and the Spirit. Membership in the Trinity of the three Paradise Deities resulting evolution deitization eventuation and new meanings, values, abilities and capacities for revelation, the Administration action and universal. Partnerships living human families, social groups, or the Trinity of Paradise do not grow simply by adding arithmetic. The potential of the group always far exceeds the sum of the attributes of the individual components.


(200.4) 17:2.6 We are overwhelmed by the prospect of what ages future, in which the Supreme and the Ultimate may reach new levels of divinity and ascend to new domains of personality function, may witness in the realms of deitization other beings even more unexpected and unimagined, unimaginable powers possessing coordination enhanced universe. It would seem that there was no limit to the potential of the Deity Absolute response to such unification of relations between the Deity and the Trinity experiential existential Paradise.


(1158.2) deitization 105:5.2 Before the finite, it would seem that any diversification of reality occurred in absolute levels, but action volitional enacting the finite reality connotes a qualification of absoluteness and involves the appearance of relativities.


(1172.5) 106:8.20 The first level consists of three Trinities, the second level there as the combination of experiential Deity personalities-evolved, experiential-and experiential-existential eventuated. And apart from any conceptual difficulty in understanding the complete Trinities Trinity, the personal association of these three deities in the second level is made manifest in our own age in the universal phenomenon of Majeston deitization, which was updated in this second level of the Absolute Deity, acting through the last and initial operator response to the mandate of the Supreme Being.

European version

In the European version there is enough inconsistency on the one hand "deitize" translates as "deified" and "deitization" and "deification", "deification", "become god" or "give deity "

(91.4) 8:1.7 The Infinite Spirit is eternal while Havona worlds are born and this central universe created by him, with him and in him, according to the combined concepts and wills unity of the Father and the Son. The Third person is deified by the joint act of creation, becoming forever in the Conjoint Creator.


(1150.14) 104:4.47 Although these associations may increase the infinity of the Father-I AM, it appears that enable and subabsolute subinfinite manifestations of its reality. The seven triunities multiply the diversity of talents, protracted new depths, deified new values, reveal new potentials, reveal new meanings. All these manifestations diversified in time and space, and the eternal cosmos, have their existence in stasis original hypothetical infinity of the I AM.


(113.3) 10:5.2 The functions of the Trinity of Paradise are not simply the sum of the apparent strength of divinity of the Father, plus those specialized attributes that are unique in the personal existence of the Son and the Spirit. The association of the three Paradise Deities in the form of Trinidad has resulted in evolution, existenciación and the deification of some new meanings, values, powers and capacities for revelation, the Administration action and universal. Partnerships living human families, social groups or the Trinity of Paradise do not increase by simple arithmetic. The potential of the group is always greater than the sum of the attributes of the individuals who compose it.


(200.4) 17:2.6 In future ages, the Supreme and the latter could reach new levels of divinity and rise to new areas of personality functioning, we are astonished at the possibility of what those times may be present in the area of \u200b\u200bthe deification of other beings even more unexpected and unthinkable, which possess some unimaginable powers to carry out a growing universal coordination. It seems that there is no limit to the potential reaction of the Absolute Deity to this unification of relations between the Deity and the Trinity experiential existential Paradise.


(1158.2) PROVIDE 105:5.2 BEFORE THE FINITE of a deity, it would seem that any diversification of reality took place in absolute levels, but the act of will to enact the finite reality involves an attenuation of the absoluteness and involves the appearance of relativities.

[Deity is in lower case.]

(1172.5) 106:8.20 The first level consists of three Trinities, the second level there as the association of personality that encompasses experiential-evolved personalities, and experiential experiential-existenciadas -existential of the Godhead. Notwithstanding any conceptual difficulty in understanding the Trinity Trinities in full, the personal association of these three deities in the second level has been manifested in our own time in the phenomenon of universal TURNING MAJESTON in a deity, which was real in the second level with the Absolute Deity, acting through the last and initial creative response to the mandate of the Supreme Being. ["Deity" appears in lower case.]

A first issue is that both translations have to be consistent, yet somewhat difficult by the complexity of the book -. On the other hand, despite the inconsistency, it is certainly thanked for trying to avoid the neologism with some periphrasis or circumlocution, which I always do with more or less successful. However, as noted Jeannie, "deification" or "deified" is not "deitize" nor "deification" / "deification" is "deitization."

I think as in the case of "trinitized" / trinitization "we" forced ", I become one with the translators who may be reading - again using a neologism, though it sounds strange to us as part the translation is done in Latin America. Would "deitizar" or even "deidizar" deitización / Deitization. The choice should be based on the decision we made about "trinitized" or vicevesa? I would be inclined to use "deitizar" with "t" to preserve the common Latin roots in English and English (Deitas) as is done in terms trini t arian / trini ta rio.

Thanks Jeannie.

Thursday, February 17, 2011

Hairstyle For 8th Grade Ball

Book, e-book and tablet, tradition versus innovation

benefits for the new reader

According to the data we could extract from this past holiday season, finally and after many delays it seems that the e-book starts off in our country.

According to comments made by David Guiu, Director of Communications PublicidadyMarketingWeb.com: "During the 6 weeks encompassed in this period, sales of e-readers jumped 200% compared to Christmas 2009. In addition, with nearly 80,000 units sold during these days, the sector has doubled sales recorded over the year. Are data from the analysis conducted by GfK from sales data collected directly at the point of sale. "

Pilar Esteban, director of Markarte says, "We are certainly pleased to see today can confirm that the e-book is a true reality in Spain , that we are immersed in English culture and new technologies generations to come will enjoy devices that meet their needs as readers. "

For all that is true, it must be incorporated devices improvements to existing terminals currently to read e-book, as long battery life, internet access, agility, and ease of use, and that these elements are easy to carry and transport from one place to another. It means that the tablet is gaining terrero both e-book against the traditional.

also because of its ease of handling and transportation, is being the best-selling paperback, increasing turnover over the Christmas period compared to 2009. Our young people are hungry for new technology and tools to motivate their learning and encourage their leisure time with more devices innovators, which has meant a reduction in the purchase of books for children, youth and science fiction in other media looking for this type of entertainment.

Sunday, February 13, 2011

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Saturday, February 12, 2011

What's The Best For Blocking Emfs

URGENT CHANGE SCORE: They have forgotten CLOSING STRIPE ...

The stripes are used as a sign to close two paragraphs, but the closing line is not deleted but should appear behind it a period or punctuation. [The English have a different use.]
Emilio
hoped - a great friend - . Unfortunately, no wine. Nor

should be deleted when closing the line occupies the final paragraph of the statement:

The publisher has released this year several works of the author, all first-time.

(Spelling of English, 2010)

This rule does not follow at all in any of the two translations. At the Seville European or note this is a mistake to delete the final line:

(215.8) 19:1.11 4. The story itself fails to adequately disclose the future development - the destination. The finite sources are useful, but only divine causes reveal the final outcome. The eternal purpose is not apparent in the early time. This really can only be interpreted in light of its correlation with the past and the future.

(223.7) 20:1.2 1. The Creator Sons - the Michaels.


(223.8) 20:1.3 2. Sons Master - Avonals.


(223.9) 20:1.4 3. Trinity Teacher Sons - the Daynals.


(224.2) 20:1.12 Like Paradise orders Days have proven to be a divine administrators, the orders of the Paradise Sons ministers have proved to be divine - creators, servers, donors, judges , instructors and revealing the truth. They travel the universe of universes from the shores of the eternal Isle to the inhabited worlds of time and space, working in the central and in the super multiple services not revealed in these narratives.

(224.6) 20:2.1 ... Avonals are planetary ministers and judges, the judges of the realms of space-time - all races, for all worlds and all universes.

226.3) 20:3.3 The arrival of a Heavenly Avonal an ever changing world in order to stop dispensing and inaugurate a new era of global progress is not necessarily a mission or a master bestowal mission. Master missions are sometimes embodiments, and donor missions are always, ie for these tasks Avonals served in a planet with a material form - tangible.

(227.3) 20:4.5 ... In your world the issue is further complicated because of the promise made by Michael to return. Regardless of the misunderstandings about the Urantia stay Miguel de Nebadon, one thing is certainly true - his promise to return to your world. Given this perspective, only time will reveal the future order of the visits of the Paradise Sons of God on Urantia.

and many more cases.

This happens also in the translation for the Americas:

(1.5) 0:0.5 Your world, Urantia, is one of many similar inhabited planets which comprise the local universe Nebadon. This universe, together with similar creations, makes up the superuniverse Orvonton from its capital, Uversa, our commission hails. Orvonton is one of the seven superuniverses evolutionary time and space surrounding the creation of divine perfection which has neither beginning nor end, the central universe of Havona. In the heart of the central and eternal universe is the stationary Isle of Paradise, the geographic center of infinity and the eternal abode of God.

(2.4) 0:1.4 1. Static - self-contained and Deity self-existent.


(2.5) 0:1.5 2. Potential - autovolitiva and autopropósito Deity.


(2.6) 0:1.6 3. Associative - Deity autopersonalizada and divinely brotherhood.


(2.7) 0:1.7 4. Creator - Deity self-distributive and divinely revealed.


(2.8) 0:1.8 5. Evolutionary - Deity self-expanding and identified with the creature.


(2.11) 0:1.11 finite level of reality is characterized by the child's birth and the time-space limitations. Finite realities can not be endless, but always have a beginning, are created. Deity level of Supremacy may be conceived as a function related to finite existences.


(3.2) 0:1.15 Deity is the source of all that is divine. Deity is God invariably feature, but all that is divine is not necessarily Deity, but will be coordinated with the Deity and tend to some phase of unity with the Godhead, spiritual, mental or personal.

And a host of examples .... Have not looked at the rules of punctuation?